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Friday, 19 May 2017

show don't tell


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tell
Show
The   sky went  dark.
The sun went up.I can see a goal.
I can see trees.
I can see  a cloud.
The trees has no leafs that's why we call.
I can see a  the white snow.                                                                                  

  • The sky   is  beautiful.and bright.
  • There are  snow on the ground.
  • The sun is  on both sides.
  • The brunch is brown like cupcakes.  
  • I can see the trees bright like milo.
  • The sky is blue like water.aa
I learn to write a story on a  google doces.
by writing it.
by writing.

Tuesday, 9 May 2017

World web

LI:highlight all of the  noun you can find.
By reading the book and find idear.
Reading a book.

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Friday, 5 May 2017

the lorax

To identify the responsibility,Causation and connection on the issue.
I learn that the lorax is mean to the woonslar.
I had to work with a partner and use a draw to wright in the evidence
About why to not cut down tree’s because it is natural for animals.
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Thursday, 13 April 2017

The Three Bear's

On a sunny day I woke up early in the to make breakfast for papa bear,baby bear and I it was to hot so I said let's go for a walk we were running to the lakes then we put our hand's.

     
The door opened then we look at our porridge papa. bear said  someone ate my porridge, some ate my porridge and someone ate baby bear’s porridge  and look it is all gone.  Then baby bear was crying he was hungry why he was rubbing his  tummy while  they were  walking down to the hallway.

Then  they went to the  hallway they look.  At their chair , someone sat on papa bear's chair, someone sat one. mama bear's chair  and someone, sat on my chair and look it is broken. And, baby bear cried.

Then they went up stairs,to see their bed’s,  someone was. sleeping  in papa bear’s,  bed, someone was in mama bear’s bed,and baby bears bed and look someone sleeping, in baby  bed. goldilocks woke up she saw the three bears she jump up and ran  home.



ran upstairs and went, under her bed.then she went downstairs and made her  own food she made porridge. and she sat on her own set and she went, up stair's and she went to sleep.

Wednesday, 22 March 2017

Japanese language (Blogging about Japan)

Learning Intention:To write a complete blog post using a fact about Japan. I learned how to say this in japaneseI  found out how to say this  in japanese   on  wevideo