show don't tell

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tell	Show
The   sky went  dark. The sun went up.I can see a goal. I can see trees. I can see  a cloud. The trees has no leafs that's why we call. I can see a  the white snow.	The sky   is  beautiful.and bright. There are  snow on the ground. The sun is  on both sides. The brunch is brown like cupcakes.   I can see the trees bright like milo. The sky is blue like water.aa

I learn to write a story on a  google doces.
by writing it.
by writing.